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Wednesday, August 14, 2019
Soccer is better than rugby!
Hi,this is my persuasive writing on why soccer iif s better than rugby. Do you agree with me? Please comment if you think that I did a good job or I can improve my wiriting. I hope you like my writing on soccer is better than rugby.
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Hi Jessi. I also think that soccer is much better than rugby. I play soccer for western. I am under ten. In October this year my team is going to a south island tournament. Who is your favorite soccer player??
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